His two year old son was still asleep on the tattered rug that covered the cold ground. His wife sat beside him as he washed his face near a broken water pipeline. Murgan and his family had got used to living on the pavement. The sun was yet to rise, the road was already bustling with joggers and morning walkers. With swift and a steady pace they moved. They talked, they laughed, as Murgan sat and watched them with silence as his companion.
Murgan got up to leave; he looked at his son still asleep on the pavement; he stood still for a second staring at his son. His son's face reminded him every day of the dream he came to the city a year back with. A dream to provide a better life to his family, a dream to power his son with knowledge, a dream to break away from poverty, a dream to become a taxi driver.
Mathre makes a final inspection of the car to make sure it is ready for the first student of the day. Mathre calls out Murgan to clean the front window once more. Murgan goes to work without a protest. Mathre is a "very good man" Murgan often tells his wife. Mathre a driving instructor at the school, frequently takes Murgan out on drives and teaches him to drive the car around the city.
"Don't tell anyone, about our drives" Mathre cautions Murgan every time.
The fear of getting fired from his job, if the authorities found out, haunts him but never stops him from teaching Murgan to drive.
"I spoke to another taxi owner. He is not coming down from five thousand" Mathre speaks looking at Murgan
She was Mathre's first student of the day. She had walked the couple hundred meters from her swanky apartment to the driving school. She looked at Murgan and gave a short smile; he washed her dad's car along with her neighbor’s cars in the apartment.
"Yes madam, please come the car is ready" Mathre called out Payal.
She climbed into the driver's seat, and started the engine, which let out a loud noise scaring away the dogs sleeping near the car. She slowly drove out the car onto the road; there was a smile on her face and a sparkle in her eyes. She had woken up, bright and eager early in the morning for the past ten days, to fulfill her dream to learn driving, her dream to drive a car to college. Her dad had sent a signal by sending her to driving class she thought.
But he kept saying "Next year", like he had for the past couple of years.
"Papa is back, papa is home"
Exhaustion filled Mathre called out for glass water. His wife had already run into the kitchen to get him one.
"Papa, remote control car" Uday pestered him
"Papa, please red color remote control car, Suraj and Ram have the same one, Papa please" he continued
"Next month" Mathre said keeping down the empty glass
"You have been saying this for the last six months" Uday softly banged his fist on his father's thigh
"How many times should I tell you not to disturb me when I am watching the news. Radha can't you take care of him" he shouted at his wife and Uday
Uday ran into the bedroom with tears in his eyes. The news channel was not tuned to, his mother serial was still playing out loud. He knew if he had stayed in the room it would just anger his dad more.
"Next month my dad will buy me the car" he kept telling his friends, he kept telling himself.
"Sir. Sweets my new car" she extended the box of sweets to Mathre
"Oh, thanks madam and Congratulations. Remember to drive slow the first thousand kilometers, the engine has to get settled"
"Yes sir, I will keep that in my mind. You are leaving very early today?"
"Yes, it’s my son's birthday today. So I was thinking of taking him to the beach" he smiled
"I came here to thank you for your help and patience in teaching me to drive, and I think I have a small gift for your son" she walked to the back seat of her car
"No please, I have done my job. The sweets are enough"
"It’s for your son sir, you have to accept it" she forced the plastic cover into his hand
Inside the cover was a box with the words "Remote Control" on it. He smiled at her and thanked her, he thought he should say 'No' to the gift and return it back, but deep down in his heart he harbored a dream of giving his son that box one day.
They spoke for few more minutes about the car, he clutched onto the cover tighter and tighter with each passing minute. She was about to leave when she said
"I couldn't find Murgan today morning. Can you please tell him to clean my car along with dad's car from tomorrow."
"I don't think he can do that"
"Why?"
"He is now a taxi driver, madam"
8 comments:
A story with "hope" written all over it. With a positive ending too :)
Once you achieve a dream... no matter however small or insignificant a dream... it may sound to others... you move on to the next. Keep dreaming!
Many of our lives are what it is today due to the benevolence of people like Mhatre who listen, understand and help dreams of the likes of Murugan.
An uplifting feel good story :-)
@Roshmi: Thank you very much for giving it a read, yes it sure had hope it's foundation
@Madhu: Couldn't agree more with you, thank you for stopping by :)
Great story! Love the different perspectives and dreams that revolve around cars!
This was a little less clear than the other one. I think the idea is sound but the story is missing some punch in the end. It seems that you're trying ot interweave the dreams of the characters, get inside each one's head and show the difference in the scale and lustre, under which there's the essential sameness of dreaming itself. But this needs to come out a little more clearly at the end.
En Sir taking a break ?
@Madhu: forced break, computer broke down big time :( but back now :)
Loved the story for the subtlety with which you have handled the theme of dream and hope.
Reading this one makes me reflect that perhaps people(me included) are too impatient with their dreams and impose their own sense of time on it. But, as you rightly conveyed here, the beauty of dreaming lies in letting the dreams take their own course.
Sorry for dropping in late this time.
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