This my first attempt at writing 55 Fiction. According to me it is the toughest to write, and after writing this one my opinion has just gotten stronger.
To people who are new to 55 Fiction.
It is a form of fiction writing, a story with only 55 words in it.
Here is my first 55 Fiction titled 'Eternal'
Lying on his chest she felt peaceful. He always had unconditional love for her. Importantly he had time for her. There were moments they sat lost in each others eyes. She never mentioned it, but he meant world to her.
Relatives entered room to console her.
Little did they know she had left with him.
17 comments:
oh nice....sweet...
Very nice. Write some more.
super duper kewl man! Awesum first attempt:) fab punch in d end:) keep it up harsha.. If anyone wants to kno how a first attempt shd be I l pass on this link:)
woah, good one
The best of stories is there, right at the next corner...this is one of those...great story bro
Shahid
It unbelievable that this is your first attempt.It is superb and very touching.
A really good first 55 fiction!
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hi..harsha.. yeah its very tough to write actually... even i experienced the same when i wrote my first 55... but yours first attempt is really a good one dude... very good one.....
Brilliant!
Thanks for leaving the comment on my story...Got lots of good inputs from you that are useful for improvement. These are actually two attempts of a bigger piece of jigsaw I am trying to write eventually which will require me to do a lot of research.
The first part of the story is abot 95% authentic and the second one has about 20% reality attached to it.
Thanks though, I really found your inputs useful. Appreciate the time you took to go through it.
Cheers
Hiyaa
entertainment in a bite!
Wonderful thought Harsha!
Waiting for more...
On of the few 55F I happen to like. It says a lot and so well at that.
Reminded me of the movie "Notebook"..
Hey Harsha! I have a little something for you on my blog.
Do drop in to check it out.
ohh..Thats so touching.....Well written for a first timer...:)
Very touching.
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